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But now standing in her all she can feel is the dread and emptiness in her heart.
The rush and excitement of doing something forbidden completely gone .
She sighed when she felt the loneliness crept in her mind again, that seemed to have become her best friend recently.
Her train of thoughts broke when she felt a presence beside her
The corner of her lips curled slightly knowing very well who it was without even turning.
The one who was there for her from the beginning, still is .
Maybe she is not completely alone after all.
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B O O K R E V I E W
[Before we begin, please keep in mind that everything mentioned below is my personal opinion. My intention isn't to offend anyone; the only reason I am going into such detail is to be able to help my fellow writers out there. I do not claim to be correct; just sharing my opinion from my experience here on 抖阴社区. The following review is based off of the intro chapters (prologue characters etc.) & the first 5 chapters only.]
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TITLE: This story's title is short (readable on every device) and simple - which is a good thing. "The sky is yellow" is a very unique title in my opinion and it instantly makes you question why. Gives the story a somewhat metaphorical / romantic / philosophical vibe, judging from the title alone. This isn't necessary but I'd recommend capitalizations like "The Sky is Yellow" to probably draw more attention to the keywords. Other than that, I find no issues with this title. I like it a lot and I'd definitely click on it to find out more about this story.
COVER: I liked how unique and unexpected the colour palette of this cover is. The image used, though unique, is somewhat generic and I'd like to know more about the story through the cover. That doesn't happen here since all we get to see is a girl standing in the breeze. I personally would have expected subtle shades of yellow on the cover to strengthen the title's standing but that isn't a necessity. The title is clearly visible but it clashes with the background image a bit and the subtitle is not readable easily (I could read once I zoomed in though). I'd personally recommend trying out a new cover to see if it helps draw more readers but totally up to you.
