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I kinda like you? (Camilo X...

By _UnicornsKilledMyGF_

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(Camilo, Mirabel and Y/N are 17 in this story) The Madrigal and the Florez families were both blessed with g... More

Beginning notes
Morning roundup
Antonio's gift
Breakfast
He who must not be named
Catastrophic dinner 锟
New visions
Trumatic past
Sibling reunion

Last straw

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By _UnicornsKilledMyGF_

.heyyy soooo I haven't edited this in a while cause I was like ITS PERFECT, but I wanted to change the scene of Camilo saving the candle to him actually saving Mirabel cause I love their friendship ship.
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"You guys look like you had fun" Y/N said to Isabela and Mirabel who had been laying in a pile of flowers, Isabela was decorated in a variety of colours other than her usual pink and purple pastels.
Camilo and Y/N and finally walked into Caista, Camilo's hand was draped over Y/Ns shoulder as she held onto his hand with the other.

Isabela and Mirabel gave each other the look once they saw how close Camilo and Y/N were.

The four laughed until they heard Alma scold them.
"What is going on?"

The four gasped at quickly backed away. Isabela stood up and backed away to the corner, Mirabel was the one who spoke.

"It's okay! Everything's-were gonna save the miracle! The magic!" She said excitedly as the Abuelas were Looking at all the "non-perfect" flowers and smashed plates that could be seen from the open door kitchen.

"What are you talking about?!" Alma yelled

"Look at our home! Look at your sister!" Alma gestured towards Isabella.

"Please just- Isabela wasn't happy"

"Of course she isn't happy! You ruined her proposal!" Alma yelled.

"Oh no no no, Y/N your knee!" Alma cried gesturing towards Y/Ns knee, she started to tear up which Y/N found very dramatic just for a knee, there was only a very small cut, probably from the plates.
Alma looked at Mirabel with rage.

Y/N quickly moved her skirt to cover her knee. She looked up at Camilo with worry before turning back to Alma, Camilo stepped up a little to show his support.

"No no no! She needed me to ruin her proposal, and then we did all this-" Mirabel gestured to the flowers around
"- and That!-" she now gestured to the smashed plates from afar, she then faced Alma once again.
"Y/N felt trapped so she let it out and the candle burned brighter! And the cracks they-"

"Mirabel!"

"That's why I'm in the vision!" Mirabel said happily
"I'm saving the Miracle!"

"You have to stop Mirabel!" Alma shouted. Luisa now showed up and stood next to Isabela,
Slowly, the rest of the families came to witness what was going on

"The cracks started because of you!" Alma yelled.

"Bruno left because of you!" She yelled coldly.
"Luisa's losing her powers, Isabela's out of control and Y/N is acting out-"

"Because of you!" She pointed down to Mirabel. The cracks that had disappeared, now reappeared and began to worsen with every yell. Y/N untangled herself from Camilo to slowly approach the scene.

"How dare you blame Mirabel for all this" Y/N said quietly but slowly as she faced Alma
"She's done nothing but HELP, what have you done? Because forcing relationships and putting all this pressure on everyone doesn't seem to do the trick" Y/N laughed sarcastically.

Alma was taken aback by Y/Ns small outburst, Alma quickly turned back to Mirabel before she would address Y/N.

"I don't know why you weren't given a gift, but it is not an excuse for you to hurt this family!" Mirabel was taken aback, it was clear that was Alma was saying hurt.

"Mirabel has helped this family! She's made us all happier!" Y/N yelled gesturing to herself, Isabela and the rest of the family. More Cracks appeared.

"Y/N look at your dress-" Alma yelled pointing towards Y/Ns dress.
"You should of stayed away from Mirabel! She gave you an attitude!"

Y/N opened her mouth to speak but closed it once she heard Mirabel begin to talk.

"I.. will never be good enough for you, will I?" Mirabel said sadly as she faced abuela coming to the realisation, everyone was quite as she spoke.
Camilo had pulled Y/N back to himself as he quietly fussed over about her knee, Y/N however was not paying attention as she kept watching the scene between Mirabel and Alma.

"No matter how hard I try"
Mirabels parents watched with concern has her sisters watched guiltily.
Mirabel looked over to her family and the Florezs who were standing on the other side.
"No matter how hard any! Of us tries" Mirabel complained anger now evident in her voice.

"Luisa will never be strong enough!" She gestured towards Luisa who looked down sadly.

"Isabela won't be perfect enough!"

"Y/N won't ever be allowed to feel anything other than CALM!" Mirabels voice slowly began to get louder and louder. Y/N shifted In Camilo's hold.

"She smashed ALL the plates because you made her mad-" Alma tried to reason.

"Bruno left our Familes because you only saw the worst in him!"

"Bruno didn't care! About this family!"

"He loves our families! I love our family! We all love our families, you're the one that doesn't care!" Mirabel screamed. More dramatic cracks had started to form as Mirabel yelled.
"You are the one breaking our home!"
She yelled, her voice began to crack.

"Don't you ever-"

"The miracle is dying, because of you!" Mirabel said angrily towards Alma who looked completely and utterly shocked, she seemed to realise that she  truly was the one  at fault.

The biggest crack formed in between Alma and Mirabel, the house now started to fall apart.

"No no no no no!" Pepa yelled as she reached for the part of the house that had Fallen. The crack started to grow all the way to where the candle sat.

"The candle!" Félix yelled in worry.
Everyone then began to run for the candle.

"Casita! Get me up there!" Mirabel yelled, casita obliged and used the railing from the second floor as a ladder for Mirabel to climb.

Adrian had tried to teleport, but since the house was breaking his power faltered and he teleported to the wrong spot, a huge piece of the ceiling was about to fall on Adrian as he had been standing there from shock due to the loss of his power.

"ADRIAN!" Y/N yelled, he looked up at Y/N to see why she was yelling for him, he only just then noticed the ceiling about to fall, Y/N used whatever she had left of her power to shift the piece of ceiling to fall anywhere away from her brother and any other of her loved ones.

She used all the pressure she could with her water to move it slightly away, it worked.
Y/N sighed in relief for her brothers safety as casita had started to guide him outside of the falling house.
But now her power had disappeared as well.

Y/N saw Lucia, Isabela and Mirabel make their attempt to reach the candle.
Camilo ran as well, but it for the same reason as the others.

"FORGET ABOUT THE CANDLE GET OUTTA HERE!" Y/N yelled desperately towards them all, Casita heard the urgency in her voice and guided Lucia, the youngest, out of the house as her super speed was playing up.
"Y/N!" The high pitched voice called after her as casita dragged her out of the house.

Y/N turned to see Isabela still attempting to reach the candle.
"Guys please!" Y/Ns voice cracked.

Camilo glanced at Mirabel has he turned into multiple people to dodge the obstacles that Came his way.
he had turned into a random man to reach the roof of the candle but his power faulted and he turned back into Camilo, he now couldn't reach the roof and he fell, however caista lifted up the railing so that Camilo could Hang off of it, he didn't care about his situation as he reached for Mirabel and attempted to pull himself back over, however Casita dangled him off.
He looked at his hands in shock that he was no longer able to shape-shift.

At the same time Isabela had fallen as she tried to swing on her vines to reach the candle, but just like everyone else her power stopped working, her vines stopped and she dropped, Casita held up the floorboards so she could roll off of them and fall on the fall with not much risk of injury.

The animals in Antonio's room started to run out, Antonio looked scared as he watched it all happen.

"Carful Antonio!" Félix yelled grabbing his son, saving him from a fallen door that was about to crush him.
"We gotta get out of here!"
He yelled as he ran out of the house.

"MIRABEL! MIRABEL!" Julieta yelled chasing after Mirabel, but she wasn't getting anywhere as casita was rolling the tiles to push everyone out.
"Mirabel leave it!" She yelled.

"Y/N!" Camilo yelled as he to was being pushed out, he tried to outrun it but he couldn't.
Maria and Carlos, who had also been calling out for Y/N were also being dragged out by casita.

Everyone by now had been pushed out of casita, only Y/N and Mirabel were still left.

Casita then tried to roll Y/N out, Y/N looked alarmed as she saw Mirabel still fighting to get the candle.

"MIRABEL PLEASE! Don't risk yourself for the candle! its not worth it!" Y/N cried as she tried to outrun casita, but just like everyone else she couldn't and she was thrown out.

Y/N groaned as she hit the floor.
Camilo ran to her aid and helped her up.
"Mi vida are you ok?" He muttered scanning her for any injuries.

But Y/N was still focused on Mirabel, she cursed herself for not being strong enough to stay in casita with Mirabel.

"Mirabel the house is going to fall" her father yelled, everyone was watching her from outside as she still tried to reach the candle.

"Mirabel get out!" Julieta was close to tears, she ran forward as her arm reached over Alma.

Mirabel had Suddenly tripped from trying to reach the candle  Causing everyone to shout out to her more. That was enough for Y/N.

Despite Camilo holding her steady and scanning her over for an injuries. Y/N shoved herself out of his grasp and ran back into Casita. She ran faster than she had ever ran before.
Camilo yelled after her as did everyone else.

Y/N had to slide herself into casita, as casita had tried to block of the entry.
"Mirabel!" Y/N yelled and ran forward to the ladder Mirabel had climbed just before, she held onto it as casita had tried to violently shake her off.

Camilo attempted to run after her but debris fell in front of the door blocking It completely
"FUCK!"
He banged his fists angrily onto the debris.

"Camilo!" Pepa scolded.

"Casita please! Help me help Mirabel!" Y/N pleaded from the inside, she couldn't get to safety if she wasn't sure Mirabel was safe. Casita seemed to hesitate but stopped so Y/N could climb up to Mirabel.

Y/N quickly ran behind Mirabel and gave her a little boost so she could reach the candle. Mirabel looked down as Y/N with a thankful smile, Y/N yelled at her getting  her to focus her attention back onto the candle.
"Have you got it?!" Y/N yelled over the sound of the house falling apart.

"Yes!" Mirabel yelled as Y/N quickly pulled her back.
Everyone was calling out for their names from outside. The two looked at each other worriedly and they grabbed each others hand.

The tower that stood beside where the candle was held started to fall towards them, casita rolled down the tiles of the roof to move both girls down, casita created a slide with the stairs so the girls could get to the floor gently, but they still fell with a grunt.

The screams of their names from their families started to get louder.

They crouched down together as casita pulled random furniture together to shield the girls, however Y/N used herself as an extra protection for Mirabel, so when the two doors came together to shield the girls, the back of the door rammed into the back of Y/Ns head as debris had fallen onto the door, pushing itself onto Y/Ns head.
Mirabel heard the sound of it and flinched.

Y/N started to feel dizzy but still held onto Mirabel for dear life, she only let go and layed back when she  heard their parents uncover them from under the door.

"Mirabel, Mirabel are you hurt?" Her mother said anxiously as she Grabbed Mirabels face and  checked Her for injuries, Mirabel just sat there in shock. The candle had went out. Julieta didn't see anything to bad so she went to check Y/N

"Julieta!"

"Y/N? Oh my- Y/N?" Julieta said cupping Y/Ns face, she looked very out of it.

"Julieta! Come quick!"

"Maria! Carlos!" Julieta called for Y/Ns parents.

They came rushing over, and immediately pushed Julieta out so they could fuss over Y/N,
"She's pale" Maria muttered worriedly, her father pulled Y/N out and rested her in his lap.

"Julieta!"

"Don't move I'll be right back!"Julieta said To Mirabel as her sister Pepa had been calling for her. Mirabel looked at Y/N with sadness, then at the candle.

"Y/N!" Camilo yelled running up to her and crouching down next to her father who Was holding her.
Y/N responded to his voice.
"I want to go to sleep" Y/N muttered tiredly her voice was raspy, but she was ok.

"Rest Mi Amor" Camilo said softly as he brushed the hair out of her face.
However julieta came running from behind.

"No! Don't let her fall asleep!, that's dangerous for a concussion"

"Oh, Y/N nevermind don't listen to me stay awake ok?" He ordered grabbing onto Y/Ns hand and squeezing it. Y/N wanted to chuckle but all the came out was a small cough.

"Here let me help you, let me help you" Dolores  and Adrian said softly as they helped Alma sit down, she looked so lost as she had lost her home once again.

"Is everyone ok?" Agustín called out.
"No, Y/N got hurt" Félix replied worriedly.

"Antonio, Lucia don't cry" Pepa tried to soothe But was close to tears herself.

"How is This possible? The encantos broken"

"What do we do now?"

"My powers they're gone, I don't- what about Antonio what is he going to do?" Camilo said concerned for Antonio.

"Mirabel?" Julieta said with concern, as she realised Mirabel was not where she was last.
"Mirabel? Where's Mirabel?" Julieta started to panic, Y/N now shifted and tried to sit up but her head hurt to much and she immediately fell back down.
"Where is she?"

"Woah woah woah, you need to lay still Hermosa" Camilo cooed,

"I need to find Mirabel" Y/N whimpered as she continued to look around even though her vision was dazed and blurry. She saw Lucia and Antonio crying, she tried to get up to go to them  but Camilo stopped her.

Y/N parents had now left to find something soft Y/N could lay on.
"Y/N stop moving you need to lay still" Camilo urged worryingly.

"I need to cheer them up" Y/N mumbled towards Antonio and Lucia, it hurt Y/N to see sweet little kids cry, Pepa however was there and trying to comfort them.

"Don't worry about anyone but yourself right now Y/N, please?" Camilo said smoothly. Y/N nodded hesitantly. Adrian now shooed Camilo away so he could Rest Y/N on his lap until their parents got back. Lucia had moved to her sister when she saw she was hurt and moved away to reach her, she now sat to Y/Ns side to comfort her older sister.

"I'm ok Lucia don't worry" Y/N tried her best to sound convincing but it wasn't really working.

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Pepa, Maria and Camilo stayed behind while the others had began to search for Mirabel.

"Mirabel?!" Luisa
Called out from the hill
"Mirabelllll!"

"They haven't found her yet?" Said a little girl to her other two friends.

"Mirabel?!" Her mother called out.
"Mirabel?!" He father also called out from the trees.

"Mirabel!" Félix yelled through the bush as Dolores followed trying to hear for her cousin, she frowned when she heard nothing.

"Mirabel!" Adrian called from behind what used to be their house, Lucia sat on his shoulders as she also called out for Mirabel.

"Mirabel!" Carlos yelled with Isabella as they walked through the town.

However, Alma saw a piece of pink string on a dead bush. She knew where Mirabel was, it filled her with guilt and sadness.

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