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BAALVEER RETURNS AGAIN

By WrittenbyChaandni

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"Iss duniya ke rakshak aa rahe hai ek baar phir saath mein aapko hasane aur acchai ko jeet dilane to padhna m... More

Introduction
Starting Promo
Episode 1 ~A sad start馃ズ
Episode 2 ~He is back 馃
Episode 3
Episode 4~He is back 馃対
Episode 5 -Pariyon ka jhooth 馃ズ
Episode 6 - shaurya's decision
Episode 7 ~ comeback of Purane dushman 馃槇
Episode 8 ~ Devaan Reunite?
Episode 9 ~Shocks and shocks 馃樀
Episode 10
Episode 11 - Baalveer's mastermind plan +new entry
Episode 12 ~ Devaan Reunited !?
Episode 13
Episode 14 -馃え
Episode 15 ~New secret revealed!
Episode 16 - Is Ananya-Aradhya Siblings for real?
Episode 17 - A new danger !
Episode 18- The truth unfolded ?
Episode 19 - Sach kya hai ?
Ep 20 part 2
Episode 21- The truth revealed!
Episode 22 ~ Another twist 馃尓锔
Episode 23
Episode 24
Episode 25 - No more Baalveer ?!
Episode 26
Episode 27- Devaan reunited ?!
Episode 28 - Dev ka welcome
Episode 29
Episode 30
Episode 31- DEVAAN'S sad baatein 馃ズ
Episode 32 ~Party ki tayari
Episode 33 ~
Episode 34 ~Burai team up?!
Episode 35 ~
Episode 36 ~Is aradhya the real princess??!
Episode 37 ~ Dadaji is back !!
Episode 38~Finally The birthday!
Noteee
Episode 39 ~Birth day #2
Episode 40 ~ Birthday #3
Episode 41~Birthday#4
Episode 42 ~Birthday#5
Episode 43~ Birthday #6
Episode 44 ~ Birthday #3
Episode 45
Episode 46- RAAZ, what?!
EPISODE 47~SHE IS BACK!
Episode 48 ~ Baalveer arrested?!
ANNOUNCEMENT!!!
Episode 49~馃憖
Attention !!!
Attention !!!
Episode 50
Episode 51~Milan or...?
Episode 52 ~ Another twist?!
Episode 53~ Truth or lie?!
X COVER X
Episode 54~Another jhatka for BN vaasi!
THANKYOUUU <3!
Episode 55
Episode 56~

Epi 20 part 1- a small update

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By WrittenbyChaandni

Episode 20
Part 1

Scene of Vivaan's home
Vivaan enters ; Dev and Khushi were sitting in sofa and talking to each other

Dev murmured to khushi -" Khushi tujhe aaye huye aadha ghanta ho gaya hai aur Vivaan ab aa raha hai ! School badal liya kya ?"

"Areh bro , kyu tension le rahe ho , extra classes the hmare grade ke extra activities ke liye , Believe nahi hota to Suts se puch lo yaa gopu rinku sab se puch lo " said Vivaan removing his shoes

"Tune konsa activity Kiya ?" Asked Khushi

"Dance ofcourse waise mummy kahan hai ? Mujhe bhookh bhi lag gayi " said Vivaan

"Mummy ko ek bade food order deal ko fix krne ke liye jaana tha  to wo chali gayi dev bhaiya ne bataya " replied Khushi

"Oh accha , waise chalo didi khaa lete hai , bhaiya aap bhi aa jao " he said while going to kitchen

Dev confused (in mind)-" Subah mei evil forces keh Raha tha aur ab bhaiya bro , ajeeb hai ye , pata nahi ye kya samaj Raha hai mujhe "

At evening
The paltan gatherer togther for group study in Vivaan's home , dev was also with them helping them

"Chalo thoda break Lelo , har 30 minutes ke interval mei 5 min ka break jaruri hota hai " suggested dev

"Haan Mai paani laati hun fridge se sab pi Lena " said Khushi and went

Suddenly aarav asked dev -" Bhaiya ek out of syllabus question puchun ?"

Dev nodded in yes

"Aapne Baalveer ko real mei dekha hai kya ?"

And whatt

As aarav completed his words , and the image of baalveer was made in dev's mind ; Dev started facing problem in breathing and his hands were being red
He controlled himself and said -" Main aata hun thodi der mei " and asap left to his room

"Bhaiya ko asthama wagera to nahi ho gaya " said rinku

"Kuch bhi rinku ? washroom gaye honge yaa room Jana matlab asthama ?" Said Vivaan

"Areh tu nhi smjhega  " said rinku

Scene shifts to KaalLok

Baalveer teleported there holding his hands -" Vinashika... Kya ..kar Rahi ho tum..aahm ...m..mujhe... pata...hai ...tum " before completing,he fainted

Vinashika goes near him -" ooho Bina sach bataye chal gaye ,Kaal mera mtlb Baalveer "
As she said , Baalveer bijli ki tarah tezi se Vinashika k gale pe apna haath rakhta hai to kill her ofc

"Maina chahun to tumhe isi waqt maar sakta hun " said Baalveer

"M..mujhe...maa..maaf Karo...baal...veer .... Ga...l..ti...ho...g...a ..y ..I mujhs..e" Vinashika said

Then he leaves her neck
-"Aage se Aisa karne se pehle haazar dafa soch Lena , kyunki ab mujhe kisi ko bhi maarne mei koi Daya nahi aati "

"Mujhe laga tum ab bhi Baalveer ho issliye " Vinashika said

"Areh nafrat hai iss shabdh se mujhe , main Kaalveer hun yaad rakhna " he said and left

"Tum ho to Baalveer hi , wrna mera itni mehnat se banaya yantra ulta asar nahi karega , bas kuch palon mei iss yantra ki Shakti dugni hogi phir sach pata chalega tumhara haal dekhkar " Vinashika said laughing

Next day
Vishi were ready for school; karuna was combing Vivaan's hair
Khushi -" Oh aaj itna pyaar aa raha hai apne bete pe "
Karuna -" Tere baal nahi bandhti hun kya ? "
Khushi -" Haan to mere Baal bandhne hote Hain ,iske Baal mei kya Krna hai wo to haath se bhi kar le ye "

Dev was coming down lost in his thoughts
Khushi -" Good morning dev bhaiya "
No reply
"Good morning bhaiya "
Karuna -" Kya hua dev ?"
Khushi -"Ye log ek jaise hi hain mummy , I know Debu bhaiya ko koi replace nahi kr skta par dev bhaiya ki vibe unse milti hai naa ?"
Karuna -"Mera Dev ek hi tha uske jaisa koi nahi ho sakta ,par haan ye dev bhi ek accha insaan hai "
Vivaan -" Kahin mujhse badla to nahi le rahe bro ?"
No reply
Dev came and sat in the sofa
Khushi snapped her finger
Dev came back in hosh -" Sorry sorry wo neend AA Rahi hai Mujhe issliye "
Khushi -" Thank God I thought ki kya ho gaya " 

After 5 mins , Dev again felt asleep
Vivaan -" Ek baat to hai ,sote huye Wo dev Joshi jo actor hai naa ussey kam nahi lagte Hain Partner "

Wait

Whatt

He said PARTNER

!!!!!!!

Suddenly Dev again felt breathing problem and his hand were being red so he quickly made some bahana and left
Karuna ji and Khushi were shocked
Piche Paltan aayi huyi thi and they were also shocked

Vivaan turned back , saw everyone
-"Kya hua sutli ? Muh band kar le wrna makkhi chali jayegi "

Sutli -" Ye possible how hai matlab ye kaise hai possible hai Vivan!"

Khushi -" Wahi to kya kaha tune abhi wo bhi kisey !"

Rinku -"Are you okayy Vivaan ?"

Gopi -" Karuna aunty , jyada kulfi khaane se iska dimaag jam to nahi gaya naa ?"

Karuna -" jama nahi pighal gaya sayad "

"Offo , aap sab ko pata chal jayega so jyada socho mat haan abhi school chalo shaam Tak sab clear kar dunga "said Vivaan




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