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The Mistake
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  • Parts 15
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Ongoing, First published Jan 24, 2016
This is a story about a girl who's abused at home, and now bullied at school, the one place she felt safe.  Her older brother is looking for a place and promises to get her out.  But she's reached the very edge of a cliff and may not be able to hang on any longer.  Her parents and other girls at school call her worthless and a mistake.  Will that push her off the edge, and make her final mistake?  Or will she escape the situation she's living in and move on with her life with help from her brother and small group of friends?

Sorry for any mistakes or errors, and for short chapters.  Also, any names mentioned in this story do not refer to any of my friends, though, they may have the same name.
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