Fate/Empty Forge

Hey everyone of my readers! I just want to know as I'm in the middle of working on the second chapter of this story. Should I just go off the rails and just do whatever I feel like? For instance making the harem stupidly long just cause (don't worry, there'll be a pretty good reason why anyone else is joining in, and will be somewhat explained in the next chapter.)

Or basically add in other aspects, changes etc to the story just cause I feel like It and to improve on the roles of characters. Like having shinji make up for not having magic circuits by taking up a variant of Command and developing it to the point where it wouldn't matter if he did or didn't have magic circuits. since he's able to effortlessly control the minds, bodies, and forms of anything that doesn't equal or surpassed him in intellect without needing any prana to do so. Insects, animals, oxygen, matter, even the mana in the air itself. Not only that, but make him more likable for all of you reading

Or turn Issei Ryuudou into Shiki nanaya with his mystic eyes of death perception included.

Now with all of that said. What do you guy's think? Should I

Just do whatever I want

Or

Still do whatever I want. But don't go stupidly far.

Specking of stupid. I realized I forgot to really explain Reforge or the white sword in the last chapter, didn't I? Oh well, since I now have the time and will to write about them. I'll explain it here

Reforge: like alteration. Reforge alters whatever shirou wants, but unlike alteration which just adds other aspects to something like giving a sword the aspect of an arrow. Reforge pretty much REWRITES whatever shirou wants into something else. Like reforging his parameters from E- - - to A. Or changing the property of a blade from sharp, to blunt. Or Reforging the unknown materials of a blueprint for a projection to one he made up on the spot that has all the properties and aspects of the original but much more understandable for shirou.

Nameless: the sword I'm going to call Tomoe cause it's easier to differentiate from instead of shiro. unlike Tirik doesn't have an power or mystery of it's own. Instead it changes it's form and aspects to whatever the user wants, and can even become a twin existence of whatever it meets as long as it encounters it enough times.

If you don't understand, Let me explain. Thanks to the principles of magic, there's isn't any chance for any weapon to ever surpass the prototype counterpart within Gilgamesh's gate of Babylon. No matter how much there worked on, how much there sharpened, reinforced etc. the finished project can't overpower the prototype. Caliburn can't beat Merodach the original sin, Gae Bolg can't beat Gungnir, Excalibur Galantine can't beat Caldabolg, and no lighting bolt made by Thor could stand a chance against the more older lightning of Zeus.

But with Tomoe. A battle against it and a prototype doesn't ever end in the prototype winning. It always results in a stalemate, since with every clash, Tomoe Shapes itself into the prototype it's against and instead of becoming a duplicate. It's like it and Tomoe were thought of, made, forged, used, and even existed exactly the same to the point where it's like the prototype was in two places at the exact same time.

Now that I finally explained the two. What do you think of them? By the way, what do you think of the story so far? Any comments you have over it is greatly appreciated. And don't worry, I'll try to update this a bit sooner next time now that I finally got done Replaying and 100% Nier: Automata, and about to finish reading Fate:Reach out. Just 6 more chapters to go.