THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING MY OC's STORY. I really appreciate it. Might aswell give you more info about him.
Fun Facts✨
-Brown Sugar Cookie is an ancient but not apart of The 5. (The original ancients)
-Brown is much nicer than what other cookies represents him.
-He fears his own power but he has great control over it.
-Most cookies hate/scared of Brown Sugar, excluding GingerBrave and Pure Vanilla.
-Brown Sugar barely interact with others due to being hated and feared.
-His favorite color is brown.
-His parents are Sugar Cookie(dad) and Cinnamon Cookie(mom). They stole dough and a cookie cutter from the witches to make their own cookie, aka Brown Sugar.
-His village was attacked by a unknown cookie (will be revealed in next story 😏) and he's the only cookie from Cinnamon Village to survive. (not exact 😏)
- Pure Vanilla reminds Brown of his father's kindness.
-Brown used to be very dependent on Pure because he was mentally unstable. Golden Cheese was the only one who noticed which is why she hate him.
-Brown could've became king if Pure Vanilla wasn't so hyper. And Pure gets to keep his eyesight.
-Brown usually wishes for something sweet. He's a sugar lover.
-If Brown became king he would be the first one to die because he would get assassinated due to jealous cookies by how strong he is. Then his younger sister would take his place which is powerful on magic.
- Brown only has two main attacks, his semi arms (the 6 arms from his back), and the ground gripper (the hands exploding out the ground). All the other attacks he learned from different cookies in his village.
- Brown is a great listener and can keep secrets.You can tell him anything.
-Brown is good at magic and attacking but mostly attacking.
-Brown has a bad habit of hugging.
-Almond arrested Brown once for looking at Onion Cookie.
-Onion Cookie fears Brown.
-Brown's favorite drink is beer.
-Brown greets his people with a kiss on the cheek.
-Brown don't like the cotton sheep.
-Brown's average power on max level (and stars) is 335K-365K. When he was corrupted he was 845K-879K.
-Brown has a natural cinnamon scent to him.
-Brown is a Attack/Front cookie, his semi arms do 45k-65k (corrupted 95k), and his ground gripper is 300K (corrupted 784K)
on max stars and level. He's a single hit cookie.
-Brown is based off cinnamon rolls.
- Brown has a treasure where he can summon big hands in the air (Chapter 8) that do 315k damage and has a 48 second cool down.
- Brown loves victories.
- Brown utterly hates Dark Enchantress more than Lily Cookie. (Wait til he finds out they the same cookie 😟)
-Brown only sees Pure as a friend, not a lover. But if you want to ship them that's completely fine since it's gonna make sense for that friendship they have.
- Brown Sugar had a sister who got kidnapped after the Cinnamon Village collapse. (reveals in next story)
Dialogue
Pre-Pull
"Leave it to me!"
Pull
"I shall protect this kingdom with everything!"
Touch
"Do you need anything?"
"What a nice smell of cinnamon."
"Reminds me of my village."
"Your majesty?"
"Need anything?"
"Loving this so far."
"Have anything to satisfy my taste buds?"
"I'll love anything sweet right now!"
Selection Menu
"There will be no defeat with me around!"
"It only takes one hit from my fiery!"
"I will bless this kingdom!"
"Anything for you majesty!"
Loading
"I will train harder than yesterday!"
"Get ready for a beating!"
"I'll show you!"
Skill
"Ground Gripper!"
Promotion
"This should do the job."
"I'll do anything for you!"
"Let's see what I have learned!"
"Time to kick some evil!"
"I feel the power!"
Victory
"Hooray cookies! We did it again!"
Defeat
"I bumped my head on the ground..."
Wish
"This will make me stronger and tougher!"
Died
"Dang it!"
Author's Note
If you want to draw Brown Sugar, PLEASE draw him with the correct skin tone because I don't want him looking like a anime character. Not only that but you're white washing which is bad.
Anyways, I would love for Devsisters to notice this story and make Brown Sugar an official character. If you wish the same and want to promote this story to the rest of the fandom, thank you so much and you're allowed to do so.
The way I would love for Brown to be introduced in the game like an event where to have to fight Brown Sugar in episodes and free him from the corruption. But he gets stronger each battle. Then you get to have Brown in your kingdom. Here's some ideas I have.
- Ep 1: Brown escapes his village and meet Pure and his friends.
-Ep 2: Brown hurts Pure.
-Ep 3: Brown Sugar vs Pure and Lily village. (Battle 1. Power lvl 134k)
-Ep 4: Brown runs away and gets corrupted.
-Ep 5: Brown's point of view of Dark Flour War.
-Ep 6: Brown finds your kingdom. (Battle 2. Power lvl 316k)
-Ep 7: Healing the injured cookies.
-Ep 8: Heading back to the kingdom. (Battle 3. Power lvl 325k)
-Ep 9: Fighting Brown again. (Battle 4. Power lvl 446k)
-Ep 10: Fighting Brown's Corruption. (Final Battle. Power lvl 589k)
-Ep 11: Unlocking Brown Sugar Cookie.
But yeah that's my event ideas. It's could be a fun event too like that Sonic event. Well that wraps up this book.
I will start drawing and posting my OC so you could see what he looks like on my socials
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