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Dawn Wing | BlackberryCatCrafts

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Thank you BlackberryCatCrafts for the submission!

⚠ NOTE FOR READERS: Dawn Wing is not a Warrior Cats OC. She is a completely original character from Blackberry's Feral series. I acknowledge the fact that this breaks a rule of this OC rater book, but I will still rate Blackberry's character. Thank you for understanding. 

⚠ NOTE FOR BLACKBERRY: Because this OC is part of the Feral series and I'm not incredibly educated on that, this review will probably lack quality advice. So if you find any mistakes, that is probably why. Also, I'm sorry about the wait, and thank you for being so patient. 

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Name // Dawn Wing

Dawn — She was born in the early hours of the morning, and a symbol of joy for Snowsnout, who had never kitted before.

Wing — She is graceful, agile, and independent.

Okay! This looks good so far. (5/5)

Guild // Guild of Wolves

WolfGuild cats are generally lean and strong, and good hunters. Their territory consists of Hemlock Ridge, Fading Sun Ridge, and the Deer Valley in between. They prey mostly upon rabbits and birds, but frequently bring down fawns or small deer when other prey is scarce. The other Guilds in the area are FishGuild, FoxGuild, and HawkGuild. They were originally a gigantic group of cats known as the Great Settlement. The Great Settlement was a huge colony of feral cats who lived in the forest. The last Keeper, Wild Crow, had died, and the High Warden, Snowshadow, became Keeper after her. He was a tyrannical leader, and under his dominion the Settlement began to die. Wolfsight, a young Warden, saw the ruin that was coming upon them, and organized a revolution. It was successful, and Snow Shadow was overthrown, but the Settlement was thrown into uneasy turmoil. Starhaven then foresaw a great danger coming upon the forest, and split the Settlement into four groups, organizing the cats into Guilds according to their various skills. They chose four wardens as Keepers of the new Guilds, and they became Wolf Sight, Fox Fur, Fish Claw, and Hawk Storm. The four Keepers led their cats across the mountains to the territories where they currently reside, in the forested land between the ranges of the Silent Mountains and the Sleeping Mountains—in a place known to humans as the Great Smoky Mountains National Park in Tennessee. Each Guild has a Guardian, a starry creature that roams the forest and the edges of the sprit world, keeping the evil of the Cold Abyss at bay and guiding it's Guild. They appear more often than the spirits of Starhaven, and any Guild cat can see them. The creatures are a wolf, a fox, a fish, and a hawk.

Wow, interesting!

Gender // She-cat; she/her

Okay!

Age // four years and three months (The Guilds don't use moons, but that would be fifty-one moons)

Okay!

Rank // Keeper (Leader)

Ooh, interesting!

Personality // Proud, fierce, calculating, indifferent, and grudging. She finds it hard to apologize, as that would mean lowering herself and admitting she was wrong. She will exhaust herself to the point of unconsciousness rather than lose. She can be gentle, kind, and even loving to those she cares about, but will rarely let it show. She is softer when her guard is down, which is infrequently. Dawn Wing is extremely knowledgeable, and, though she would never admit it, learns a great deal by listening to and observing other cats. However, her wisdom often causes her to act as though she is better than the others. She is self-assured and fierce, more than she should be. Her superiority is her downfall in an argument. She is an excellent planner and strategist, and is always attentive, but tends to keep her thoughts to herself.

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