?THE BEAUTIFUL JOURNEY?- A Different Point Of View

?THE ELDER BROTHERS VISIT?

He looked at Shani who was busy in his own world and he went near Maharaj to confront him. Karn who heard footsteps whipped his head towards the source and stood up on seeing the middle aged man coming towards him.

Yama smiled softly asking,"Are you okay, Maharaj?? You seem to be bit down!!" Karn chuckled but there came overwhelming feeling within him which urged him to behave like a child to this man. He want to whine and complaint caring about nothing. He though controlled his emotions couldn't help but say,"My friend Ashwathama was coronated today in North Panchal today!"

Yama was shocked. Don't say his brother was jealous. He bit forcefully asked,"Are you jealous? But you have biggest kingdom. Why..." Karn gave one look towards the blabbering man saying,"I'm happy for him. But it's no... He didn't invite me or inform me. My spy relied this information to me!" Yama heaved a sigh of relief. Thank God!!

He said,"Maybe he's busy!!" Karn nodded his head saying,"Maybe... But a single letter would've been good right!? You know my parents refused to stay with me in my kingdom. Just because I'm a king of two powerful kingdoms gives me real fear of loosing my friends, my Suyo, Ashwa, Kauravas. I can't sacrifice anymore. It's too much now! I don't even have siblings who can pamper or care for me. I feel like I'm all alone!!"

Yama want to scream and shout that Karn was his Baby brother. He want to say that the river Yamuna flowing in his kingdom is his sister. He want to say that Shani who never cares about anything cares for him the most and he want to shout that he is Suryaputr but he can't tell. He was not supposed to tell. He patted his little brother who gave one drowsy tired smile before saying,"You can go and take rest. I'll be fine. I'll be okay!!"

And there he goes. Putting a fake smile to make people believe that he's okay. He's happy. But Yama didn't say anything. He just stood up moving towards the hut only to see Shani looking at his brother with sad eyes. Both the brothers sighed in disappointment about not able to help the little one. They hoped someone will save their brother from loneliness. What they can do other than that?? They can only hope!!
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Hey all... So I updated!! How was the chapter!? I hope you enjoyed it.💜💜

Shani and Yama are in disguise.

Ashwathama didn't give invitation or didn't inform Karn!! Do you think it's right? Karn is sad😭😭

Recently I got so much hate for pairing up Karn and Draupadi, Making Duryodhan good and Arjun bad. Guys I already said, The characters given in the story are just for imagination. I never said this is real Mahabharata.

Moreover, really Arjun is not bad!!?? Okayyy .. I wish to say something, Arjun and every single characters are gray character in the epic. You can see bad and good characters in them. Some of the immature fans stupidly believe serials where Arjun was shown as a golden child. Noo! It's not true.

I didn't know Arjun is good or bad but definitely he's also a human who made several mistakes just like Karn. What Karn did was shown openly while Arjun's mistakes were buried deep inside just to make him protoganist.

1. Him not protesting when his mother asked to share his wife with his brothers

2. Ekalavya... He felt happy when Archer cut his thumb as Gurudakshina

3. He is a fanatic Prince who dissed Karn by means of his caste.

4. He didn't put a fight to save Draupadi but just sat there obeying elder brother's command while she was being disrobed.

There are many things...

Fine whatever. And I'm not going to justify Karn's character and behaviour too. He did bad things too.

Believe whatever you want but see the story as story. I'm not Sage Vysa. I am just writing the story on how it would've been if it is different. If you guys want, you can read otherwise, I'll request you to not read. It's really not necessary to read the book which you don't like.

I also want to thank readers who played a very important role in motivating me. Thank you for asking for updates, encouraging to go ahead and everything. But I saw the enthusiasm has died down because the comments had reduced drastically. Well the fun part will be soon...💜💜💜

Keep your fingers crossed.

Will you like if I changed the kingdom name? If so comment your favorite names for Vasusen's kingdom.

(The abusive and nasty comments about any character or author will be removed)

See you soon,
Until then,
Your author,
Shruti.💜