I wrote this for EVERYONE. An introduction to my universe.Best for slow , attentive , close reading. Stick with it. When you get to the action parts (which doesn't take long ) you should be invested enough to want to unravel the mystery and enjoy i...
" This introduction is gripping and full of intrigue. It sets up an intense, high-stakes world with vivid contrasts ...beauty and horror, intelligence and brutality, hope and doom. The mention of Gamleon's paradoxical nature is especially compelling. He isn't just another hero hmmm he's complex, burdened, and facing an unstoppable force. The looming flood adds an apocalyptic urgency, and the mention of the cavern hints at something far greater than mere survival. " Melanie Brewer - All Star Fantasy ( book review club)
"...One thing that stands out is the rhythm of the sentences it flows with an almost breathless intensity, pulling the reader deeper. The mix of mystery and revelation works well. There's enough information to entice, but so much remains unanswered: What else is in that cavern? How did the world come to this state? What exactly are the' true motives?
This feels like the start of something grand, both in scale and in theme.....
Brian Khalif-Hassam... Editor of Adventure and Fantasy treasures.
( Indie blog influencer)
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