Gravity Falls.. It's a DEAL! (Completed but being Edited)

Stan's POV

" so.. so you've cracked a way to get to Bill's dimension? Why didn't you tell me?" they looked sorry, "Stanley, we didn't tell you because we haven't got it fully operational yet and we knew if we told you then you would try to rush it, besides, we were gonna tell you when it was done..." "yeah Grunkle Stan, look, we were gonna tell you but we just couldn't, plus there are things that you don't even know and.." Stanford slapped his hand on Dipper's mouth before he carried on, "what do you MEAN, thing's I don't know?" "It's just.." Stanford smiled small-ley".. there are just things that you shouldn't know, now please can we just leave it there?" "yeah, alright.." "c'mon, it's late, we better get to bed" we all went to bed for night, I didn't know what to expect from tomorrow....

THE NEXT DAY...

I woke up from a glitch in the gravity, "WHAT THE FU.." I dropped to the ground, "grrr,oww mfff, son of a fhhhg" I got up and ran down to Stanford's studies... he had rebuilt the machine? "STANFORD, WHAT ARE YOU DOING!!?" so this is why he didn't want me to know, "DON'T WORRY STANLEY, THIS ISN'T LIKE THE OTHER ONE" he was over the loud sound of the machine, "WHAT? HOW IS THIS NOT ANY DIFFERENT?!" "BECAUSE IT ONLY CUTS THE INTER SPACE CONTINUUM, NOT THE DIMENSION" he seemed like he was sure, I trusted him, it started to open up.... it revealed.. a mansion? "WHAT THE.. WHAT'S GOING ON? STANFORD!!" "ACCORDING TO THIS, SHE'S HERE?" Dipper didn't hesitate, he had already tied a rope to himself and jumped through, the sound stopped but the portal thing was still open, I grabbed onto his rope so he wouldn't be left there, "kid!! What are you doing?!" "SAVING MABEL!!" he made it to the Mansion, good luck kid...

Dipper's POV

I just jumped through the portal using the strength from my metal leg, I made it to the Mansion. I looked around to see it was floating in the middle of space, I ran to the front door, I looked through the window on the left, it looked like just some normal lounge, not like ours, an actual fancy lounge. I tried the knob on the door... it was open, weird, I snuck in but as soon as my foot touched the wood floor Bill appeared in front of me knocking me on my butt, floating he was wearing a black dressing robe, his little hat and eye patch and he was holding a cup of coffee, he had an evil grin on his face, "oh shit.." "oh shit indeedy..." he stopped floating and walked towards me, he made his cup disappear with his magic, he looked mad but without the whole, turning red thing, just as I thought I was a gonna, I saw Mabel going down the steps, "MABEL!!" "Dipper? Dipper!!" she ran towards me and Cipher, she was wearing a black skirt, a yellow sweater vest with a white blouse, some black tights, some yellow heels and a yellow headband with her hair in a tight ponytail, she still had her fringe out. She hugged me and I hugged her back, "Dipper, how are you here, WHY are you here??" Bill was behind her, "Star, could you maybe go and make me a coffee, PLEASE!" "yes Cipher, I'll be right back.." she went running off, leaving Bill and I alone, he came close to my face, "you're lucky she saw you, or you would be in my torture room right now" he whispered it so Mabel wouldn't hear, "you better not have hurt her you asshole!!" I whispered as well, "oh don't worry, she is QUITE comfortable..." she smiled deviously, I stood up, he was still taller than me by about 20 cm, "what's that supposed to mean?" "Ohhhhh, nothing..." "I'M BACK!!" Mabel came back holding a cup of coffee, Bill takes it and has a sip, "AHHH, perfect as always Shooting Star" he looks at her with enchanting eyes, she smiles from the flattery, "ah, DIPPER, why don't you come and sit, oh you might wanna take that rope off... oh don't worry, I'll tie it to the door so it won't go anywhere" she smiles at me, "alright," I take it off and Mabel ties it to the door, I go into the lounge and sit on the sofa, I look through the window, I can still see the portal, I have to get her and get outta here. Mabel comes in with two cups of hot chocolate, she sits next to and hands me a cup, I take a sip, Bill was still in the kitchen I think, "so WHY are you here?" I whispered in her ear, "to save you.." she pulled back, "what? You.. you can't, I BELONG to Bill" she looked confused and angry at the same time "Mabel? We have to go.." "NO.... I can't go.." she stood up, "maybe you should just go..." she then left the room. I didn't know what to do, I just stared at my feet. "WELLLL, ya tried!" Cipher sat next to me and put his arm around me, "..go away.." I put my head in between my legs and just sat there, "you know, there is ONE way you can get her back.." I sat back up, "..howw?" He smiled and whispered in my ear "a soul for a soul..." "what's that mean?" he sat back, "it means that you can... TRADE your's for her's, you will be mine, then she will be free..... what do ya say, we gotta deal?" he held his hand out, "NOO!!" Mabel grabbed his hand before I could shake it, he didn't look happy so he pushed her off his arm onto the floor, he grabbed his cane and was about to start beating her "DON'T TOUCH HER!!" I jumped on his cane but he just pinned me to the wall with his magic, he held his hand out again, "DEAL OR NO DEAL!?" he yelled, I didn't say anything, I just gave him the evils, he turned red, he raised his cane and hit Mabel, "NO!!" "*sobs* don't Dipper..." he looked at me again, "deal... or no deal.." I just kept staring at Mabel, he raised his cane again, "NO, DEAL, DEAL, DEAL!!" "NOOOOO!!" he smiled and held out his hand, it turned into a blue flame, I shook it... "Dipper *sobs* no..." "I had to Mabel" Bill turned back into yellow, "good, well Star, seems your free" "Dipper, *sobs* you IDIOT!! You STUPID FOOL!! My deal with him is off now... which means he can hurt our family... you idiot" my eyes widened, he smiled and clicked his fingers, I was teleported to an empty room with just a chair, the door was locked! "BILL!! BILL!! LET ME OUT!!" he appeared in front of me, "I swear if you lay a hand on my family, I'll..." "whoa, chill kid!! I'm not gonna do anything... yet, look, if it makes you better, that wasn't Mabel I was hitting, it was an illusion, but the things it said was true!!" "wha.. what? So if that wasn't Mabel, then... WHERE IS SHE!?" "Don't worry, she was still asleep, and no, I haven't hurt her at all, well unless she asked me to.." "huh?" "when she wakes up she'll be in her normal bed back at the Shack, as for you....." he came close to my face and grabbed my collar while he smiled with his eyes turning red, "YOU'RE MINE!!".......

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