~Thunderstar's Quest~

Thunder sat out on the ledge of the twoleg fence. Stupid twolegs, they didn't know anything. Smores approached. "Hi thunder!" He said. Thunder didn't speak. "HEY THUNDER?" he shouted. "YOU IN THERE?!" "Yeah, I am!" said Thunder. "I was just thinking." Smores dipped his head. "About what?" "About running away." Thunder replied. "Why?!?" said Smores. "It's perfect here!" "Yeah, right." Thunder said. "These pellets hardly taste like food!" "True," said Smores, "but we get guranteed protection. Wild cats? Not so much." " So? " said Thunder. "They get REAL MEAT. We get a gross mess of pellets." "Honestly, thunder, You will not stop complaining." said Smores. "You know what?" said Thunder. "I'm gonna trek into the forest." "Fine." growled Smores. "Hope you have fun DYING." Thunder flicked her tail and ran off. 

    She approached the camp. The buzz of cats was loud: but Thunder was quiet. She sneaked up and saw the warriors. "Flamestar, what are we going to do?!" growled a cat. "I don't know." said the cat adressed as Flamestar. She looked around camp. So many cats, just too many. She flicked her tail as she walked slowly into camp. "Kittypet!" yowled the cat that was talking to Flamestar. She froze. Flamestar stared at her. In fact, the WHOLE camp stared at her. "Erm....." she said. The cat named Flamestar walked up to her. "What might you want?" he said. "Um... I would.... er... like to join." The cat who was talking to Flamestar said, "A kittypet! She's a guranteed softie!" "Quiet, Sharktooth." said Flamestar. "Then you shall join. But what is your name?" "T-T-Thunder." she stammered. "Come up with me here, Thunder." said Flamestar. She scrambled up to the place where Flamestar was. "Now thunder. I pronounce you Thunderpaw! You will be taught by me." "NO!" yelled a deep voice. It was the cat named Sharktooth! "A kittypet cannot join! That is rubish!" said Sharktooth. Sharktooth scratched her belly, knocking her down. "What's the matter? Can't take a fight, kittypet?" "I CAN!" she roared. Her mind floated to her first memories. Before she was flung by her mom into twoleg place, her sisters teased her. "What's the matter? Can't fight?" She would show everyone. She ran at him, scratching his tail. It bled and bled, and a bloody tuft of tail fell to the ground. "Fine!" He said. "BE THAT WAY!" He tugged on her collar with his teeth. It ripped off and she landed on the ground. 

"Thunderpaw has proven her worth in a fight against Sharktooth. She is now declared a real member of Thunderclan!" She got whispers. Just whispers. 

Suddenly, an ice-white cat came up to her. "My name, is Snowpaw. You did some pretty good fighting out there." "But wait." Said Thunderpaw. "I barely know you!" "So?" Snowpaw flicked her tail. "You'd make a great friend and warrior, Thunderpaw, I know that. Might you want to be my friend?" "Sure." said Thunderpaw. Suddenly, a cat emerged from the bushes. "Who are you?" said the Mysterious cat from the bushes. "I-I-I'm Thunderpaw. I just joined." "I am Tribesong." said the mysterious bush cat. Suddenly, it began to rain. It rained harder and harder. "Everyone, to your dens!' yowled Flamestar. "That's your den." Said Snowpaw. She gestured to a den covered with leaves in front. "Oh." said Thunderpaw. "That's where the apprentices sleep. I'll tell you more tomorrow, it's raining."  She went to the apprentice den and nested in a moss bed near Snowpaw. The other apprentices moved away from her. She looked at the sky and heard thunder. All the cats in every den were startled. Now, Thunderpaw knew it was her destiny to join this clan.

First chapter guys! You like? I hope so. There's a bad storm outside. Well, bye, and hope you enjoy!

-pikachu278