Moving up

Narrator: It's the first day of moving into yet another new house with new neighbors and of course a new school. Do you think she will fit in or be an outcast once again?

As I'm thinking of what could really go wrong on my first day, my mom walks in and reassures me I will be fine. I surely hope she is right about this new school. As she leaves I start to on pack and so many thoughts are going through my head, like what to wear, how to wear my hair and to always be myself. I'm so tired I just decided to fall asleep.

Well it's time for me to go to school, if I don't hurry up I will be late.

Please tell me if I should continue ?