The Unknown Life (Dissected)

This line was deleted from Mansion.

Who was here? Was it another Lost? Was it a Supremacy Scientist?

I couldn't see from all the dust surrounding the silhouette of the figure.

I had the gun in my hand.

 I could get out, I would shoot down whoever stood in my way. I would take them out, I would vanish them. It's going to be me who takes them by surprise.

I would take out whoever was hiding in the dust. 

"Time for you to go." The Lost screeched at me. They aimed their guns at me. 

One of them noticed the gun in my hand.

"Quick, vanish her, she somehow freed herself." The Lost yelled at the other. "She has the gun we gave her."

The Lost was quick. But not quick enough.

The injection came ripping the air towards me. I dove past it and somersaulted to behind them.

I shot them.

They were gone.

I aimed my gun at the puff of dust. 

I pulled the trigger.

The gun didn't have any more injections loaded in it.

I threw the gun down and ran towards the dust.

I threw a punch at the silhouette.

"Bah! Juliet, it's me." I recognized that voice. It was the boy who came up to me earlier. Draco Miracle. 

He stepped out of the dust. 

"Did you really have to punch me?" he smirked and asked.

"Hey! I thought you were a Lost or a Supremacy Scientist." I complained

He playfully rolled his eyes. "Oh, please."

Well, that was the deleted line. Did you like it? I kind of liked it, but I think it went too fast. 

Here is one of the crueler ones. It is the same thing as above, but this time Juliet does have an injection left in her gun.

Who was here? Was it another Lost? Was it a Supremacy Scientist?

I couldn't see from all the dust surrounding the silhouette of the figure.

I had the gun in my hand.

I could get out, I would shoot down whoever stood in my way. I would take them out, I would vanish them. It's going to be me who takes them by surprise.

I would take out whoever was hiding in the dust.

"Time for you to go." The Lost screeched at me. They aimed their guns at me.

One of them noticed the gun in my hand.

"Quick, vanish her, she somehow freed herself." The Lost yelled at the other. "She has the gun we gave her."

The Lost was quick. But not quick enough.

The injection came ripping the air towards me. I dove past it and somersaulted to behind them.

I shot them.

They were gone.

I aimed my gun at the puff of dust.

I pulled the trigger.

The figure dropped to the floor.

I heard them whisper one last thing. "Juliet." It was like a whistle in the wind. They knew me.

I ran over to see who it was before they vanished.

It was Draco. Draco Miracle.

No. No. This couldn't be. 

Why was I so stupid? 

"No!" I screamed. And he was gone.

I am pretty sure you are glad I didn't decide to go with that. I didn't think it was fitting. For a few reasons. One, the same reason as before, I felt like it was going to fast. Two, Juliet shouldn't really care about Draco this much right now. I mean I also did another version of it where Juliet was really mad because her only source of possible light was gone. But as you probably can infer, it was pretty bad. Three, I didn't want Draco to vanish just yet, it was too early in the story, and not really fitting. I had a couple of more reasons too, but I will keep those reasons to myself because they kind of will reveal the plot.