Hey girl! I‘m currently reading Our Flor and i just love it. The story has so much potential and i just think its such a pity that many give up on the story because of the writing style and spelling mistakes! I would live to help you edit it if you allowed me to! I‘m a writer myself (althought i havent published anything) i‘ve already done a couple of editing projects and am a beta reader for many wips so if you‘re interested send me a message or dm me to mx instagram: kk_crish_yo. (Its the one with the ducky with a computer) i would relly LOVE to edit it. Like for free and honestly for my entertainment but also because your story is very good and the plot has so much potential that i would be a pity for it not to reach its max! Think about it and message me anytime
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Did the chapters of a broken soul got jumbled up or smthng like after the chapter rage and fury it comes they found me but it doesn't matches the previous storyline