
LuekLikeNuke
Damn. Reading the first chapter again actually hits like an arrow. It starts with minor humor and keeps being interesting for some time. How did I fall so low?! ;( I'm gonna do my best to bring back the humor in this Rinne chapter I'm working on!

KazuminLover
@LuekLikeNuke its all about developing your plotlines, it takes time and some faults but it will get better overtime
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