@Radheradhe2018
Hii
If u r interested in trying crime thrillers do try GONE AMBER which revolves around the not so death of Amber and her secrets, and how her husband and daughter uncover them and soon skeletals come out of the room. The question is not who? But why?
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Hey, may I have your attention for a while?
Royalty drips from her blood, but disgrace stains her name. A princess unloved, a bride unwanted—yet when power shifts and shadows whisper secrets, she must rise. Not as a delicate flower, but as the storm that shakes an empire.
Loyalty. Betrayal. Desire. Vengeance.
If you dare step into her world, be warned—this is not a fairytale. This is war.
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Thank you for your kind review and suggestions. I’m deeply ashamed for the book “before my last breath “ and I’ve decided to take it down. I’m sorry for the discomfort my books caused and failure for not delivering any good morals. I’m ashamed as a writer.
P.s - I’m really sorry, if I have offended you in any form.
Don’t worry, I’m not deleting it completely but I’m planning to rewrite it soon, with better character’s, better morals. And thank you so much for your time. When I’ll republic the newer version, I’ll definitely let you know about it.
@Psycho_deity Hey Don't do this. I just gave my review. It's the 1st time when a writer took review in positive way. I am really smiling. Not the discomfort and it's just Don't mind. I am like old school person. When a writer will write a story it should new vision of moral, truth and loyalty for new generation. Wow You wrote it at 16 . Clap For your courage and talent. Don't delete it . It's your 1st story may be in some way feel wrong but it's your 1st journey to become something successful. It should be remind you getting better everyday. God bless you and Keep it up.