Okay, so the chapters up to chapter 8 are all fixed up now. Although I did rewrite them I can already tell that I’ll end up fixing everything up at least one more time sometime in the future, it’s a given.
I’ve always thought that my story was hard to make because of all the small stuff I did, now I know that that is the problem!
I forgot:
-Sylvia wanting some plushie in the third chapter,
-continuing the comedy cashier in the cafe (at least I think so)
-probably lots more
Looking at that I’m a bit overwhelmed. Like I have to learn! I’ll try to add the cashier back in the chapters that I’ll fix up and in the future, but the plushie was one of those things that I just had to change, so that I could use it later.
Anyway that’s enough of my random thoughts, the 7 and 8 chapters are now fixed, and I changes so little that you guys probably won’t even notice the changes.
(But it’s time for a hunt! In one of the two chapters I added a “feesh” instead of fish, can you find it? Comment on it if you do!)