Volkanobursto

Okay, so the chapters up to chapter 8 are all fixed up now. Although I did rewrite them I can already tell that I’ll end up fixing everything up at least one more time sometime in the future, it’s a given.
          	
          	I’ve always thought that my story was hard to make because of all the small stuff I did, now I know that that is the problem! 
          	
          	I forgot:
          	-Sylvia wanting some plushie in the third chapter,
          	-continuing the comedy cashier in the cafe (at least I think so)
          	-probably lots more
          	
          	Looking at that I’m a bit overwhelmed. Like I have to learn! I’ll try to add the cashier back in the chapters that I’ll fix up and in the future, but the plushie was one of those things that I just had to change, so that I could use it later. 
          	
          	Anyway that’s enough of my random thoughts, the 7 and 8 chapters are now fixed, and I changes so little that you guys probably won’t even notice the changes. 
          	
          	
          	
          	(But it’s time for a hunt! In one of the two chapters I added a “feesh” instead of fish, can you find it? Comment on it if you do!)

Darktimevoyager

@Volkanobursto feesh hunt every feesh found is a sushi for bay
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Volkanobursto

Okay, so the chapters up to chapter 8 are all fixed up now. Although I did rewrite them I can already tell that I’ll end up fixing everything up at least one more time sometime in the future, it’s a given.
          
          I’ve always thought that my story was hard to make because of all the small stuff I did, now I know that that is the problem! 
          
          I forgot:
          -Sylvia wanting some plushie in the third chapter,
          -continuing the comedy cashier in the cafe (at least I think so)
          -probably lots more
          
          Looking at that I’m a bit overwhelmed. Like I have to learn! I’ll try to add the cashier back in the chapters that I’ll fix up and in the future, but the plushie was one of those things that I just had to change, so that I could use it later. 
          
          Anyway that’s enough of my random thoughts, the 7 and 8 chapters are now fixed, and I changes so little that you guys probably won’t even notice the changes. 
          
          
          
          (But it’s time for a hunt! In one of the two chapters I added a “feesh” instead of fish, can you find it? Comment on it if you do!)

Darktimevoyager

@Volkanobursto feesh hunt every feesh found is a sushi for bay
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Volkanobursto

Okay, so both the 5 and 6 chapters are both fixed up now, although the 5 was fixed yesterday so it probably doesn’t count.

Volkanobursto

Alright, the third and fourth chapters are both fixed up. They had way less to fix than the first two. I guess that that’s what happens when you start writing more.

Volkanobursto

On the bright side though, I’m back into writing! And I’m planning to take full advantage of it.

Volkanobursto

Rewrote the first two chapters! I’m probably gonna try to rewrite everything until now, even if only a little. If you were hoping for a new chapter soon, then sorry, but I’ll be rewriting everything first.
          
          Besides I anyway need to rewrite the last chapter, for sure.

Darktimevoyager

@Darktimevoyager scott cawthon did a similair strategie for lore change
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Darktimevoyager

@Volkanobursto i see a clean up and update to previous chapters ,while fixing things so that futur chapter make more sense ,making readers want to go back to see if lore changed
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Volkanobursto

@Darktimevoyager until I stop there will probably not be any new chapters, however I’m as I said into writing again, so I’ll spend as much time as possible on this again.
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Volkanobursto

After a lot of research and imagining I’ve come to the conclusion that Spark can’t be following physics (who would have thought?). It would be extremely underwhelming and difficult to make it happen, so I’m going to use real phenomenons as a base and build off of them. On the bright side I’ve found some inspiration which I was hoping to find, so Spark should be in the final stages of development. 
          
          This does also mean that I’ll be beginning to reveal Spark’s past (and… condition?) in the near future. Of course how near it actually is I don’t know.

Darktimevoyager

@Volkanobursto  i see ,it is diffucult seeying that jolteon is the most prominant when it comes to adding abilites because of its type ,seeying that it produces and stores electricity in its fur ,jolteons can be way more lethal ,by delivering a static shock in a way to make an opponent semi magnetic ,due to iran in blood ,they theoreticly can use that to have homing pin missiles,so it is diffuclt just due to the fact its electric ,because almost everything in the world runs on a type of energy
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Volkanobursto

@Darktimevoyager dunno if I can call it behaviour of electricity though, it’s got something to do with it.
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Volkanobursto

@Darktimevoyager huh, well I went more to a specific behaviour of electricity, so I didn’t think about that.
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Volkanobursto

Chapter 17 of Dorm of Eeveelutions is out! Unfortunately, just like this one, the next chapter will probably take a while. I have plenty of work to do for school. Even more so since I’ll be moving out of Poland. This means that I have a lot more work to do so that I can enter a serious school. Yep, this is how I’m revealing that I’m moving.

Hoyong99

@Volkanobursto have fun wherever you move to
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Volkanobursto

Okay… so for the past few days I’ve been finding some time to write, even while exploring. Currently it isn’t a new chapter yet, but there will most likely be one soon.

Volkanobursto

@LilSushiGuy now that’s a way to get some dedication! 抖阴社区 a comment and realise that you should stick with what you have! I really don’t want to have to figure out what happens and how it will be 3k words in each chapter!…
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Volkanobursto

@LilSushiGuy speaking of dedication: I’m struggling! I am definitely struggling a bit with writing the next chapter. I haven’t even started! (Although sometimes I write it all in basically 1 day) I’m brainstorming some ways to get back in writing, but so far the best Idea I had was to start another story… one that I plan to have 3k words in each chapter… and will definitely need a good chunk of time to write since I don’t wanna tarnish ES while writing! I need to also write characters that behave extremely shy and emotionless and what will be even happening in the story… 
            
            Yeah maybe I’ll stick to trying to sort out what is happening in Dorm of Eeeveelutions instead.
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Volkanobursto

@LilSushiGuy yeah that sounds about right. English is kind of my first language, but it also isn’t…. I started with English, but after 1 grade I left that school and entered public ones in Germany and Poland. I’m terrible at punctuation with English.
            
            Meanwhile I believe … I believe that my first language is English, but my expertise is mid to high at best
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Volkanobursto

So it seems that in korea I won’t really have that much free time, so chapters as a maybe

Sonicxpokemon

@Volkanobursto no problem
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Volkanobursto

I’ll probably rethink the story a bit. The plus is that I have a moment while I’m in the bus or something, so I can think.
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