Hey :)
I know, you are a new writer, at least here on this plattform, but I really wanna encourage you to not give up or doubt yourself. Especially in the beginning, when you don't get much vites it is easy to doubt yourself, to thing your stories aren't good enough or to have the feeling that no one will like them. But that's not true. I really enjoyed your story, and I've read many ff's on here in the years... I really enjoy your writing style and the way you put your words on the... well screen (I guess xD)
You really have talent, and I really really hope you stick to writing stories, even if it's jsut for fun or in your free time. If you ever wanna talk with someone or so, feel free to give me a message or just talk with me :)
Love, Ia