Okay, so I did one change with who was swapped with who.
Min is swapped with Kwazii instead of Valentina being swapped with Kwazii.
The reason for this is a change I feel like Min would be a better fit to be swapped with Kwazii. In my, au Min is a young adult, and Kwazii still believes in those pirate stories (I think Calico Jack told him as a kid) and I feel like a young adult would still believe in stories like those. (I do know that some adults still believe in stories that they were told when they were younger) and Calico Jack has more experience than Kwazii.
I changed some of the designs but I'll be showing that at the end and here's a rewrite of chapter 1.
Small swear warningChapter one: Captain
Tweak's POV:
Sunlight shines throughout my room hitting my face. I immediately cover myself with the blanket. I wanted to get more sleep I'm not exactly a morning person and a messed-up sleeping schedule doesn't exactly help. I hear something hit the floor next to my bed. I open one eye and glare at what I think is the culprit. It's Pinto, my roommate, who is in his PJs and still has a pillow in his hand. His expression changes when he sees me wake up, "It's six in the goddamn morning." "Says the person that still isn't awake" he replied. He throws the pillow back on the ground. I let out a big sigh and turn around, facing away from him, "I can feel your eyes burning holes through me." Pinto just snorts, "Whatever." He grabs some clothes for school and puts them on. I lay there and try to fall asleep again. My body is so used to not getting enough sleep these days. The past year or two have been hard on my mental state. The nightmares are rarely stopping and my anxiety only worsens every day. "I'm leaving. Shellington is dropping me off at school today!" The automatic doors open and shut. And I'm left alone again, laying in bed. I roll over so I can see my
clock. 6:20 am it read.
Shit!I hop out of bed and rush to put on my clothes and brush my hair. I was almost out of my room until I realized that I didn't have my hat and jacket. I checked my whole room they weren't anywhere to be seen. "Fuck!" I yelled running out of my room and going to the launch bay. I seriously hope Bianca's kids or the Vegimals or anyone didn't hear me swearing. It's very out of character for me to be swearing. Once I got there I was greeted by Natquik and Min. "Hey, you two. Is the Gup-A ready?"
"Not yet. Paani is still fixing something put it be ready soon. Natquik replied. We talked for a while about various things, what was our favorite mission that we went on, and other mundane topics like this." Peso walks up to us, "Captain you're hair looks nice down." I felt a blush creep onto my cheeks but I decided to ignore the comment. I didn't realize I had my hair down. "Thanks, Peso!" I smile at him "Are you ready for the day?" I asked him. Peso shrugged, "Sure I guess. But being here all the time makes me feel tired and kinda useless." Natquik spoke up, "Don't say that about yourself. You're probably the most qualified person to be an Octonaut as you can tell us what kind of sea creatures we are dealing with and know your sea creatures better than most people!" "You mean besides you, Nat!" Min added causing both me and Peso to chuckle a bit. "Hey!" Natquik replies. The group continues to talk about the mission while I watch them, they make such great friends. "The Gup-A is ready." We heard Paani say. "Shall we get to the mission? Cause we don't have all day." Everyone turns to look at me. "I'm ready for an adventure Captain!" Min said, then doing a backflip into the Gup-A. I jump into the Gup-A while Natquik hops in.[Tweak and Min say this at the same time]
Min: OPEN THE HATCH MATEY!
Captain Tweak: Peso open the hatch!Peso walks over and pulls the lever with that, Min, Natquik and I leave the octopod. It was quite calm in the ocean currently, I wonder if it'll stay that way. We hear someone call for help it was a crab as his friends got trapped under some rocks. I lifted the rocks, Min picked up the crabs, and Natquik banged one of the crab's pincers. They thanked us as we left then Min noticed something about me.

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(OUTDATED) Octonauts: Swapped
FanfictionWhat if the Octonauts swapped roles, personalities,likes, dislikes and their fears? Note: this takes place in my au so the characters may not act as they do in the show and Peso's and Pinto's mom is named Valentina in my au so the name is NOT CANNON...