?|THE LAST PIECE|?{Wmmap}

(Author: Hello, this is the first time writing.
I am a newbie and don't have much knowledge on writing.

I would gladly accept any advise.

I sincerely hope you like it!!!!)

          ~ *_______________________*~

Ghostly and erie silent devoured the shady white hospital room the only sound breaking the silence was a constant _beeping of a machine_

In the heart of the shady room a girl lay on the hospital bed wearing a thin hospital gown her eyes barely open.

The beeping sound was like a torture to her already strained mind.

She bit her lips in helplessness, as her body was slowly giving up on life.

To her life unfolded as a game of puzzle, some people were lucky enough to find all the pieces and some found none.

But she was fortunate enough find all of them and thus was devoid of any regret.

But

There was something she wanted to do,
she wished desperately to embrace the warmth of a family, to know how it really felt like to have siblings to have parents, someone who would unconditionally love and care for you.

Her heart twinkled with envy towards those who had parents.

But she never once felt sorrow over the fact that she didn't know the essence of LOVE, FAMILY and AFFECTION and what it meant.

It remained the last piece of her unfinished puzzle,
A piece she could never grasp no matter the effort.

But now that she's leaving behind the search of completeness.... she discovered the piece she desired the most reminded out of her grasp.

Her sense of strength slowly blended into nothingness as she even lost her strength to continue bitting her ice cold lips.

She could no longer resist the temptation of eternal slumber.

She was indeed in the brink of death.

A dry chuckle escaped her pale lips, her face painted with sorrow.

"How pathetic."

Her exhausted eyes blurred and slowly closed to rest for eternity.

The girl slowly tried to open her eyes. It felt like the world would come crushing at the moment she opens her eyes.

*Tch

She grumbled in annoyence, as her hole body ached.

'It hurts!'

'huh? It hurts?'

'i didn't die?'

Confusion filled her mind as she wondered.

She considered the possibility that she did not die rather just feel unconscious.

'I'm alive!!'
She thought happiness engulfing her.

She was about to celebrate but felt extremely uncomfortable.

She tried to lift her or at least move but her attempts all failed.

For some reason her body was unresponsive and did not move the way she wanted it to move.

After a considerable amount of time she was finally able move from the uncomfortable position and even grasp her surroundings.

The environment was strange and she could hear loud noises and cries.

"Where am I? I was in a hospital..."

After a few seconds she finally paid attention to herself and examined her body.

'why do my hands look like that? Those are my hands, right?!'

          {=====================}

This is my very first story so apologies if it doesn't feel professional.

(The chapter was rewritten)