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Chapter 30: Sibling Pride

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A few days later,

At the cricket training camp:

(The sun cast a golden glow over the sprawling cricket field.

Young boys in crisp white uniforms dotted the ground, some practicing their bowling and batting while others jogged along the boundary line.

Kabir stood near the nets, adjusting his gloves with an air of determination, as the coach barked instructions.)

(Kiara and Kiaan sat on a wooden bench under a shady tree, a little distance from the practice area

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(Kiara and Kiaan sat on a wooden bench under a shady tree, a little distance from the practice area. Kabir was clearly in his zone, his bat resting against his shoulder as he listened intently to the coach.

Kiara's eyes followed Kabir's every move, her lips curving into a soft smile. She leaned forward, resting her chin on her palms, completely engrossed in watching her younger cousin.

Meanwhile, Kiaan sat cross-legged beside her, his sketchbook propped up on his lap. His pencil moved swiftly across the page, capturing the scene in front of him. The outline of Kabir's stance, the nets behind him, and even the scattered cricket gear were taking shape on the paper.)

Kiara: (nudges Kiaan) Dekha? Kabir kitna focused lag raha hai na? Bilkul professional player jaise!!! Pure Dhoni vibes aa rahi hain

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Kiara: (nudges Kiaan) Dekha? Kabir kitna focused lag raha hai na? Bilkul professional player jaise!!! Pure Dhoni vibes aa rahi hain.

Kiaan: (smirks, barely looking up) Haan, haan. Focused toh hai, par Dhoni banne ke liye consistency bhi chahiye.

Kiara: (rolls her eyes) Kabir toh kar lega!!! He is very dedicated!!!! You concentrate on your sketching only!!!!

(Kabir stepped into the nets, facing the bowler. The ball came whizzing toward him, and with a confident swing, Kabir sent it flying.

The sound of the bat meeting the ball resonated across the field, drawing a few approving claps from the coach and the other boys.)

Kiara: (smiles) Wah! Did you see that? Pure class!

Kiaan: (chuckles, adding a few more strokes to his sketch) Haan, accha shot tha. Waise, main yeh moment capture kar raha hoon. Dekhna chahegi?

(Kiara leaned closer, curious. Kiaan tilted the sketchbook slightly to reveal a rough yet detailed sketch of Kabir mid-shot, his bat frozen in the follow-through.)

Kiara: (exclaims, genuinely impressed) Wow, Kiaan!!!! Yeh toh perfect lag raha hai. Kabir ko dikhayenge, toh he'll be very happy.

(Kiaan shrugged nonchalantly, though a hint of pride crept into his expression.)

Kiaan: Bas aise hi, quick sketch tha. Waise, tum itna emotional kyun ho rahi ho?

Kiara: (smiles, her gaze drifting back to the field) Kya karun? Kabir ko aise perform karte dekhna... it's like watching him grow up.... Meri chhoti se bhai ki jagah, ab ek confident player khada hai.

Kiaan: (grins mischievously) Haan, aur tujhe feel ho raha hai, ki tu buddhi ho rahi hai?? hai naa??

Kiara: (whacks his arm playfully) Shut up, Kiaan!

(As Kabir hit another powerful shot, his coach clapped and shouted-)

Coach: Good shot, Kabir! Well done!!!! You're improving a lot!!!!

(Kiara's chest swelled with pride as she saw the coach pat on Kabir's back.)

Kiara: Mujhe pata tha, ki yeh kar ke dikhayega!!!

Kiaan: (closes his sketchbook and leans back on the bench) Kabir ke liye toh, tum ek fan club start kar lo.

Kiara: (laughs) Haan, Kyun nahi? Tum bhi join karoge naa?

Kiaan: (shakes his head with a mock-serious expression) Mujhe uska agent bana do. Main uske matches se paisa kamaaunga.

(Kiara shook her head and let out a small chuckle. Just then, Kabir turned towards them and waved, his face glowing with excitement. Kiara stood up and waved back energetically.)

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Later,

(As the session wrapped up, Kabir jogged over to them, sweat glistening on his forehead and a big smile on his face. He looked exhilarated, holding his bat with pride.)

Kabir: Kiara di, Kiaan bhai, kaise laga?

Kiara: (stood up and ruffled his hair affectionately) You were the best, Kabir!!!!

Kiaan: (holds up the sketchbook) aur yeh lo... tumhaare liye surprise hai.

Kabir: surprise??? Mere liye?

(Kabir took the sketchbook and stared at the drawing, his eyes lighting up.)

Kabir: wow bhaiya!!!! yeh toh amazing hai!!! did I really hit the shot like that?

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Kabir: wow bhaiya!!!! yeh toh amazing hai!!! did I really hit the shot like that?

Kiara: (beams) Of course, Kiaan ka talent aur tera talent-perfect combo!

Kabir: (hugs both of them tightly) aap dono best ho, seriously!!! Thank you for coming here with me!!!!

Kiara: Always proud of you, Kabir. Bas aise hi mehnat karte rehna!!!! Consistency is the only key to excel in life!!!!

(Kabir nodded, his grin growing wider. As they left the cricket ground together, the trio's laughter echoed, a testament to the unshakeable bond they shared.)

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Author's Note 🎉🏏✨

Ahhh, this chapter was such a vibe! From Kabir absolutely killing it on the cricket field to Kiara going full proud sister mode and Kiaan being his usual savage, artistic genius-this trio is just unbeatable! 😍🔥

Also, can we talk about Kiaan's "I'll be his agent" moment? 😂 This dude is already planning his commission while Kiara is ready to start a whole fan club! Sibling dynamics at their finest! 🤭❤️

Tell me in the comments-who's your favorite sibling in this trio? 😏👇

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