Paths: Changes×Chances

This fic will go under Hiatus for a while. Now that we've reached the apology, I hit my first milestone in the fic so I can take some time to think.

It isn't because I don't know what to write for the next chapters but it's because I need to review the older ones

I have to re-work at least the first 7 chapters because they are full of grammar mistakes&more. Also my writing style changed a lot since then so I'm trying to improve them

I will also fix the lack of dialogues and interactions. ret-con a bit the timeline of a few line of events and create a more coherent flow.

[list of things that are going to be modified]

There could be new poster art for every chapter (don't count on it)

only change I'll do to chapter 1 is gonna be adding the talk between Meruem and Palm, I already completely re-viewd it a couple of times

Ch 2 and ch 3 might end up completely re-written. there's a lot i want to change about them, they could get longer as well. Thing is that compared to the entire Kaiokusco arc getting two 20 000 words chapters one after the other, the most important part of the story, Neferpitou's initial struggle to cope with loss, started becoming too small to me, it takes very little of the fic

The main changes to the timeline are gonna be how much time Pitou spends with Knuckle, her initial flight to Hentles, and being discovered by Morel

I'm gonna change that Pitou will spend 1 month with Knuckle (minus 1 week where Knuckle goes to guard Gon at the hospital like in canon), then he's gonna re-seal her nen, Palm is gonna stay with Pitou another month, and only then Pitou goes to Hentles.     

Anna's introduction is more built up throughout the chapter and it's gonna lead to Morel's intro

the Nature of the dialogue of when Pitou apologizes to Meleoron is gonna change a bit, importantly it'll be Meleoron to tell Morel about Pitou's surviving now, instead of Morel figuring out on his own (reasons you'll see)

I'm gonna clarify exactly how much time passes to the exam, and then to when the entire Kaiokusco thing happens, so I'm gonna have a clear timeline there as well

I might end up squeezing in another whole chapter of just slice of life with Palm&Knuckle and another one with Anna

The mini-arc with Gon, Killua, Kite and Leorio is gonna stay unchanged obviously, so will Pitou's exam

The Hiatus will stop when I post a new chapter at the beginning of the fic which will be the Introductory chapter for new readers with warnings and disclaimers about the fic. when I'm done polishing the fic I will also post it on Neo-book, that's why I'm polishing it before doing that, also to take the time to better think the next arc

The comments on this chapter are open for discussion and criticisms about the fic, I will always be ready to discuss unclear points or oddly executed bits and might fix the fic accordingly

This Hiatus might last quite some time, half-a-year at absolute worst....so, with that let's talk  more in the comments