how to fix a broken heart ;; hiccelsa [completed]

H I C C U P

"PUNZIE!" I yelled/cried. "PUNIZE. PUNIZE PUNZIE PUNZIE."

"Hiccup! What do you want?!" she shouted as he was climbing down the stairs.

"She left."

"Yes Hic. I know this bu-" Punz started but I cut her off.

"She left ME. 'Forget us' were her exact words and I can't breath. It hurts TO breath. She left me. I messed up!" I started sobbing as I fell to the floor.

I didn't hear a thing. Not one word. But before I knew it I was lying on my back and Punzie reached down and punched me square in the nose. Probably broken but I deserved it.

"Ow. I needed that though. Thanks." I sat up and rubbed my nose, and winced as soon as I touched it. "But did you have to break it?"

"Shutup. We both know you deserved a broken nose." Punzie got up and didn't bother helping me up. "By the way, Jack went with her."

That got me up.

"WHAT?!" I shouted.

"Yep. Might want to go after them. Wouldn't trust Frost boy around her."

I didn't hear what she said after that. I was already out the door.

J A C K

As soon as we were done buying cookies, Elsa wanted to go to a bar. Me being the stupid me I was said yes. I was way too busy eating my 12 chocolate chip cookies-fresh out of the oven-to pay attention to what she had said.

But when we pulled up, I immediately regretted not paying attention.

"Els. I don't think this is a great idea.." I trailed off.

"First. Don't call me that. Second. If Hiccup can go get drunk, then why can't I?" She stated while locking the car. "Now c'mon! You had your fun now let me have mine!"

And the next thing I know I'm on a bar stool counting shot glasses. Elsa told me to keep track of how much she drank. So far, I had counted 9-wait, 10.

She turned towards me and just stared. After like, 5 minutes, she giggled and asked, "Why's you're hair white?"

"I-I-I dyed it that's why." The question had caught me off guard.

"Noooo. You're old. Arn't ya?" she giggled and them burst out laughing. "Yourefunny. ButIdontknowyou."

She slurred her words and she was talking fast. "Yes you do Elsa. I'm Jack. Ya know, mortal enemy??"

"I don't have a mortal m&m. Why would I hate such a DELICIOUS candy?!" she hiccuped and then whispered, "Don't tell anyone but those m&m's talk on the televiIon."

She put one finger over her lips and then started giggling.

"C'mon. Let's go home." I tried pulling her up. No. She didn't budge.

"Nooooo. I don't wanna. Now buy be another...mini cup!" she pulled me back to the bar and started begging. "Please please please please please."

"Ok. Ok. OK. Geez, calm down."

I bought her one more shot and when she was finished she had her eyes squinted reallll hard. After what seemed like, forever, she finally stood up.

"Ok. We can go home now." she giggled and pulled me outside to the car. I quickly paid the bartender and sprinted to catch up to her.

When I got to the car, Elsa was trying to climb through the window. I couldn't see her face but you could hear her hiccups from a mile away.

"Jaaaaaaaack. *hiccup* I'm stuuuuuuuck. *hiccup*"

"Coming!"

I ran over to the car and managed to get her out of the window. When she did, she fell on my chest. And guess who came running into the driveway, how he knew where we were I have no clue. Hiccup Haddock. And he didn't look too happy to see me with his girlfriend in my arms.

E L S A

I'm in someone's arms. I don't know who, but definitely a guy. I can make out his expression. He's scared. I can't see his hair. Maybe it's Hiccup? I should apologize. He-wait a minute. Hiccup iss..I don't know who he is. But this stranger is holding me. I just wanna snuggle up closer to the stranger. Out of no where I hear a hiccup, a shout, a clap like a punch and then I fall out of the stranger's arms. That was funny.

"Haha..." I trail off then I'm lifted by magical forces. "WHEEEEE!"

The magical forces put me in what feels like a car and then closes the door. Next thing I know I'm asleep.

H I C C U P

I was furious. Elsa and I might not be a couple anymore but I'm determined to win her back-again. And the last thing I wanted to see was Jack holding a giggling Elsa in his arms.

"JACKKKKK!" I shout. He looks up. He's scared. I start walking towards them and before I know it, I'm on the cold concrete of the parking lot. Did he just...? And then all I saw was black.

J A C K

"SH*T!"

Why the hell did I punch him?! When he wakes up he is gonna kill me. I guess, I guess I'll just take them home now. I picked up Elsa and buckled her up in the passenger's seat. I dragged Hiccup to the backseat a buckled him up the best I could. Punzie is gonna love this story..

AUTHORS NOTE:: Elsa had a little fun this chapter. Jack had a mini freak out and punched Hiccup. How did Hiccup find out where Jack and Elsa were? How is Punzie gonna react to this?

I had so much fun writing this chapter! And, the edit up top is Jack and Elsa at the bar. She's laughing at his hair and he's just stressed out.

This is probably the longest chapter I've written so far. Andddd, we hit 6k reads. AHHH. It's getting there alright. Please please please. PLEASE give me input on the Jelsa story I'm releasing after Christmas. I'm still going to write it but I want your opinions. Because your opinions mean a lot and if you don't like Jelsa, I'm ok with throwing a little drama in there. I mean, it is a high school fanfiction. There has to be at least a little drama, am I right?

But, leave your opinions on the new story. Let me know about the chapter AND the whole story in general. Like I said, your opinions mean a lot.

I love you all so so much and I'll talk to you on the next update.

-Maddie♡