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Comment Topic: The beginning, climax, turning point, resolution. Every story has its own peaks and conflict. Comment on the character's internal or external struggles in the chapter and how well it was handled.
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Book Title: Pieces Of Olivia
Spotlight Chapter: Spy or no spy?
Summary Thus Far in Book: Yesterday, Olivia R. woke up in a hospital after having been hit by a taxi. She is quick to realize that she has no memory of herself and is the only one in the building without a British accent. The only person who knows what her name is is the handsome Nick Granger: passenger in the taxi, well-known musician, and the person Olivia threw everything within reaching distance at when she woke up. After she calms down, Olivia learns that Nick has been at the end of her bed the entire time she's been unconscious. The pair form a fast friendship, the only one Olivia now has in the world. Meanwhile, Scotland Yard Detective Sparks has been trying to figure out Olivia's story from half a name and the single key found on her person.
Author's Note: At long last, it's my turn! Thanks so much to Dawn for personally seeking me out and introducing me to this super neat group. I'm really excited to get feedback on this story of mine, so please, don't hold back.
1. Are the characters themselves, particularly Nick and Olivia, easy to visualize? Can you get a good idea of their personalities and feelings, even with this not being the first chapter that they are introduced in?
2. Is this believable? I'm not a doctor, obviously, and the internet can only give me so much as far as amnesia is concerned. What I want to know is do you buy it?
3. And last, but not least, I want to know the obvious: would you continue reading? Or are you at least intrigued enough to go to the first chapter and read more into the story? (Adding it to your reading list or voting speaks volumes for me, folks!)
Genre: Chick Lit
Rating: PG (Some language)
Winning Comment: NBR#1
MODERATOR questions:
Olivia is obviously struggling with who she is and who this handsome stranger is.
Questions 1. Are the characters easy to visualize Oliva for sure the paragraph describing her was detailed in her physical description. She also has plenty of questions to what's going on around her to get a sense of who she is.
