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Comment Topic: The end of a chapter is important in keeping readers engaged and turning the pages all night long. Putting a book down at the end of a chapter should be a near impossible feat for readers to do. Comment on how the chapter kept your interest to know more.
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Book Title: Don't Act Like You Forgot
Spotlight Chapter: Prologue
Summary: N/A
Author's Note: Hello, I'm so excited to be spotlighted again! It's a great way to start a new year. xD I got a lot of really helpful advice/tips&tricks from the last spotlight and I'm looking forward to receiving feedback on my work again because you guys have been such a great help, so thank you so much in advance! :) And here are my questions:
1) I wrote this chapter in a way that I didn't mention any names, just characteristics of the characters to differentiate them from each other because I didn't want to reveal their identity yet. So what I want to know is if you can easily identify the characters, like can you tell them apart, who's doing the action/talking etc or is it confusing? If it's confusing, I would like to know how to improve it in such a way that I won't have to reveal any of the characters' names.
2) I want you(as a reader) to feel something(maybe anger, fear, injustice whatever) in this chapter and hopefully, spark the interest in you to continue on reading, so is my description enough to make you picture the scenes and feel something from it? I would like to know how I could improve on this aspect as well.
3) I included various information for the settings and also a little bit of backstory for the location, so what do you think about my settings/environment? If you like it, I would like to know what it is and if you think it's not good enough, I would like to know how to improve on it to make it more interesting.
