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Announcements: Five Days Left!! To vote on your favorite chapter for the first round of Battle of the Chapters! Voting closes March 30 so please cast your vote and support your fellow members. Check out the 'voting details' section for tips on how to vote. 

Commenting time frame (CST): March 24 to April 2

Comment Tip: Give praise where praise is due. Knowing what worked well is just as important as finding out what didn't. By providing your reasons for why you liked something, you are helping the writer better understand what to keep or change.

Comment TopicAs writers, our word selection and sentence structures can be as enticing as the plot and characters themselves. Comment on the author's ability to present their story through diction and sentence structure.

Moderator: mokbook  <-Don't poke me I bite ;-)

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Author #1: Sceritz

Book Title: Deus Ex Anima

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Book Title: Deus Ex Anima

Specified Chapter: Prologue

Summary Thus Far in Book: N/A

Author's Note: Wazzup! I'm honored to be a spotlight book for this week and I hope you enjoy the opening chapter of my book. I've spent way too much time in this thing (on and off over the years) and I'm really pushing myself to finish editing.

Q1) I know it's only the intro so you don't have a lot of information on her, but how do you feel about Kyomi's character?

Q2) So, what do you think about the action in this chapter?

Q3) The Prologue's gotta have a hook. Do you feel it's hooking or nah?

Thanks so much for all of your feedback in advance, I'm truly happy for people to be checking my work out. I hope it's fun for you as well!

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