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Announcements: Seasons greetings! Wishing you all have a very happy Christmas and a wonderful New Year from all of us on the board.

NBR will take a short break during the festive season, and we will be back on January 6th, 2017 with more spotlight authors and prompt challenges.

Commenting time frame (CST): Dec 16 to Dec 25

Comment Topic: Comment on the set-up of the scene in the chapter and how well the authors did it.

Moderator: mokbook

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Author #1: DragonGirl_97

Book Title:  Magic's Revenge

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Book Title: Magic's Revenge

Specified Chapter: CHAPTER 1: Kerensa

Summary Thus Far in Book: N/A

Author's Note: Oh my gosh, I'm just a little bit nervous at the moment (correction: really, really, gut-wrenching nervous) >.< "Okay, calm down Sagittarius, you can do it; just breath."

Just want to say thanks to JettaFrame for getting this book noticed for NBR and for introducing me to such an awesome community! I just love reading all the great stories in this recognition book and I've met some really cool people. Thank you to the NBR moderators and such for accepting my story as well!

Good golly gosh, I just don't know what to say. It's my first time getting my story spotlighted and I've had a complete mind blank on questions. Maybe if I start typing, something coherent might appear...

Question #1: As a first chapter, I wanted to slowly edge the reader into the story. Original, when I first posted this story way yonder in the past on 抖阴社区, I literally threw the reader straight in but then I didn't know how to explain how she ended up in the situation she did. And it's quite important. So my question to you is did you find this first chapter interesting enough to bring the reader into the story so that they will keep reading to discover what happens?

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