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Comment Topic: Comment on the set-up of the scene in the chapter and how well the authors did it.

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Author #1: AmeVicky02

Book Title: Lighthouse Lullaby

Specified Chapter: Part 11 | Saturday, 26th September

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Specified Chapter: Part 11 | Saturday, 26th September

Summary Thus Far in Book: Ambrosia "Amber" Underwood -- a seventeen-year-old high school student and hater of change -- goes to the old lighthouse in her town almost every night to battle insomnia. For quite some time now, she's been very careful not to make friends and to be as distant from people as she can. So, she loves the solidarity of the lighthouse. But on one Friday night when she finds a teary-eyed Dylan Frost there, everything starts to change, much to Amber's dismay.

In the current chapter, Amber and Dylan are at the high school queen bee's party that Amber had invited Dylan to without much thought, purely out of guilt. (Dylan is often bullied in school, and Amber doesn't defend him.)

Author's Note: Hi everyone! It's a wonderful feeling to be spotlighted once again. (And I'm just as nervous as I was the first time around!) 'Lighthouse Lullaby' is my second story, and it is completed. So, I'm not exactly looking for changes in the plot. But here's what I would like to know:

1. Did you enjoy reading this chapter? (Your thoughts on the song would be appreciated, too. Vanic is one of my favourites.)

2. What do you think of Amber so far? I know that it must be a little difficult to judge the MC when you're being thrown into the middle of the plot, but any thoughts you have on her are appreciated.

3. Finally, what did you think about Dylan and Amber's relationship?

Thank you so much for reading my story and taking the time to leave wonderful, kind and useful comments. I hope you enjoy this chapter. Thank you again! <3

Genre: Teen Fiction

Rating: PG-13 (for some language).

Winning Comment: 

#NBR

Congrats on the spotlight! You definitely grabbed my attention with the summary. I'm a total sucker for this kind of story, in fact after reading this chapter I went and read through the whole book from the start to the end and totally messed up my schedule because I was supposed to get work done this afternoon but no I just had to read your entire book it's your fault XD Can't listen to the songs with my current sucky connection but will definitely check those out when I'm home with reliable Internet! I really enjoyed this, it's dreamy and refreshing with lowkey sad but still beautiful undertones and an un-cliche backstory that's revealed little by little. I especially love how you deal with some "cliche" subjects in very unique ways. How the problem of Gracie is solved in the end is one of the best and most memorable ways to deal with bullies that I've ever read and that's saying a lot because bullies are like in every second teen fiction book lol

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