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#1) Number of Author Questions: We do our best to listen to our members and one constant feedback we always receive is 'Dawn, I don't have enough time.' So after much consideration we've decided to lower the allowed number of author's questions from three to two. We hope that by doing this, members will now have time to give more detailed answers and include specific examples from the chapter in response to the two questions asked. The comment topic will remain as usual so please don't forget about it. We will implement the two question rule starting round 62.
#2) WINNERS: We have a few winners to announce. Congratulations to our two newest TCs (Triple Crowners) TimothyMarsh and AhsokaJackson. Also we welcome in another CR (Champion Reviewer) SamSchloesing who will be showcasing his work next round.
#3) November Prompt: "I have to deactivate you. I'm sorry." (Use it in anyway you like)
Comment Topic: The first chapter and the first paragraph are extremely important to every novel to hook the readers but so is the first line! Did that first line draw you in? Did it create the intrigue to keep you reading the paragraph? Comment on your reaction to it and offer suggestions on improvement if necessary. And remember to please be diplomatic.
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Specified Chapter: Prologue
Summary Thus Far in Book: N/A
Author's Note: Hi everyone! I've read some amazing stories in the time that I've been a part of NBR, and not only has it helped me find new stories and become a better reviewer, but also know what to look out for while revising my own. This wouldn't have been possible let without the NBR board members, so a huge thanks to them.
Please don't hesitate to be blunt with any suggestions/critiques. Here are my questions:
1. Are you able to follow along with whatever happens in this chapter? I realise that this is only the prologue and the protagonist (whose thoughts you're almost following) isn't even named until the end, so I'd like to know if you can understand what's happening and what she's doing throughout the chapter. If not, any suggestions you have to improve it would be great!
