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Final Author's Note: Thank you everyone for providing such helpful feedback. You all gave me great ideas on how to make this chapter better, and I'll (hopefully) put everything to good use by making a better, rewritten version of this chapter.
I chose TimothyMarsh because, not only did he give me better ideas for the structure of the chapter, he also gave me the idea to change the location to a more fitting one, and was not afraid to point out this chapter's flaws. He also gave me insight onto how my character was perceived, and made me realize that he did not come off quite the way I wanted him to.
Tegan1311 pointed out various awkward sentences and inconstancies, and was not afraid to tell me that something didn't seem to work.
zuko_42 offered me some helpful advice for portraying the main character's mental illness, and also another characters reaction to a murder.
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Specified Chapter: Chapter 1
Summary Thus Far in Book: The Dream Traveler is book two in The Dream Weaver series. At this point in the story, Wren has arrived back on Acklemarian soil. Missing for the past three years, she is now being pursued by the different talent guilds and the Fire Circle throne.
Part of the magical world she lives in includes people having tattoo-like markings on them. These inky marks, when given to another person can mean a pledge of some sort to them (a Flourish), or a promise to marry them (a Ring).
If you're looking for a further summary, please watch the book trailer video! (Yeah, I know, I'm crazy. Have fun watching it.)
Author's Note: Woo! So excited to be back in the spotlight. And here by a prompt win? Even sweeter, thanks for your votes everyone. Glad you liked the story.
