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You're chapter was great, don't get me wrong, but I want to do my best to help you so I'm pointing out the few flaws I could find and not wasting any time with praise (since I'm guessing you already know how good of a writer you are ^-^)
Final Author's Note: The Spotlight week was a tremendous learning experience. The NBR reviewers were extraordinarily generous in their time and their willingness to really help improve the text. The feedback was thorough, insightful and it has helped me develop as a writer. Each reviewer offered unique insight and for all of that, I am immensely grateful. Now it's up to me to use this. Thank you, thank you, thank you to everyone!
Book Title: The All Mads: The Complete First Season
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Spotlight Chapter: Rewritten Chapter 4 (It's the very last chapter in the book)
Summary: After agreeing to take on the powers of a spirit animal and becoming a Phenomena—a human infected with a paranormal disease—Victor used his new abilities to murder his abusive parents. But he doesn't remember doing it and, when seeing his parents' corpses, forces himself to believe that they aren't dead. A witch named Mia arrives the next morning and asks him to become a rumor detective, a sort of police force for the supernatural world. Now he's learned that the reason he can't remember murdering his parents is because he suffers from Dissociative Identity Disorder, and he has completed his first rumor detective job. Shortly afterwards, he's approached by a boy about his age, who he learns is going to be living with him and Mia.
Author's Note: Firstly, I'd just like to thank the NBR moderators and reviewers that made it possible for me to be in the spotlight once again. I'm editing the completed draft of TAM right now in the hopes of getting it published, so feel free to tear this chapter apart if that's what it takes to improve it. I'm certain I'll need my writing to be as polished as possible in order to have a chance at success.
1. Before my writing was, well, a bit of a wordy mess. After reading everyone's feedback and ChayAvalarias's 'Advance Editing: Tightening + Word Choice,' I've been trying to make each chapter easier to read by lowering the amount of unneeded words and smoothing out the descriptions. Does it work, or does it feel like there's too little now?
