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As Mulder indicated, this is a party. I'm looking for your goods, your bads, your ups and downs, your jokes, your advice, your anger, your tears, and everything that you have to bring to the table.

But PLEASE, read the freaking directions because you can't join this party unless you agree to dance.

CR Round DIRECTIONS:

We're going to be doing a little bit of meta-analysis. For each chapter, answer one of the two questions posed. Then please make the following annotations as IN-LINE COMMENTS for all of these items when you come across them in the chapters:

#1 - One part you liked (just type "Thumbs Up" (or give the emoji) in an in-line)

#2 - One part that you think could be better/stronger (just type "Needs Juice" (or give a drink emoji) in an in-line. Clarification appreciated, but not required)

#3 - One part of the story that reminds you of something in your life or of something you've read/heard before - please explain

You can repeat these "stickers" as often as needed through the chapters, but please make sure you do at least one of each.

In-line Comment Preference: YES—See above!

Genre: Science Fiction

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Author: LLMontez

Specified Chapter: 28

Summary Thus Far in Book:  Here are the bullet points—hopefully they help,

●Invaders attack—the remaining human population lives underground in the URE (United Regions of Earth) in Martial law
●The HHP is a eugenics group in the URE given full governmental authority - Janika and Dean were contracted partners within the HHP and were charged with producing two children. They tried to conceive and were unsuccessful. Janika was released from the HHP contracts while Dean was reassigned. She spent one night with the man who had been pursuing her relentlessly and to her surprise, she accidentally became pregnant. In this part of the book, she wants to keep the whole thing a secret as she doesn't actually know 100% who the father is—the man she loves (Dean) or the man she slipped up with (Kia).
●Janika is Commander of ARC10, one of the ten ships designated to take the humans to their new habitable planet. She has been put in charge an elite team of militia known as VIPERs who will assist her in ground reconnaissance during fueling trips in their five-year journey to the new planet.

People you need to know:

❊Commander Janika Lorn - Narrator, ARC10 Commander
❊Lieutenant Commander Hayomo - The leader of the entire mission and Janika's commanding partner on ARC10
❊Commander Dean Freyer - ARC9 Commander, Janika's former HHP partner, best friend, and lover.
❊Simon Lorn - Janika's adoptive father
❊Warren Freyer - Dean's father who despises Janika more than anything else that exists
❊Dr. Bertrand Knuckles - Medic and inventor of PAHLM device—only one who knows Janika's secret
◘VIPERs -McCroy, Coodi, Avant, Norbit, Umpire, Grant

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